Lesson 9 · Beginner 11 minutes Craft

Turn AI Drafts Into Finished Work

A first draft is not a finished thing. This last lesson covers the mile most people skip: editing the output, putting your own voice back in, and making sure nothing generic or wrong reaches your reader.

By the end, you'll have:

  • A simple two-pass editing routine
  • The tells of generic AI writing
  • How to get your own voice back in
  • A final check before you hit send

The Lesson

Everything up to now was about getting a good draft. This is about making it yours.

1

A draft is raw material, not an answer

The most common mistake with AI isn't a bad prompt — it's sending the first output. It's usually 70% there: roughly the right shape, slightly off in tone, occasionally wrong on a detail, and unmistakably not you.

Treat it like a first draft from a competent colleague. You wouldn't forward that untouched either.

The reality of good output: you're the editor. Editors aren't failed writers — they're the reason good writing ships.
2

The tells of generic AI writing

Once you know these, you'll spot them instantly — in AI output and in your own edits:

Everything in threes

"Fast, reliable, and scalable." Lists of three everywhere is a rhythm tell. Break it.

Empty enthusiasm

"In today's fast-paced world…" Filler that sounds positive and says nothing.

"Not just X, but Y"

A construction so common it reads as a fingerprint.

False balance

Every point hedged with "however" and "on the other hand" until it commits to nothing.

Over-explaining

Restating the question, summarising what it just said, telling you what it's about to tell you.

Uniform sentence length

Real writing has rhythm — long, then short. Flat rhythm reads as machine.

None of these are wrong exactly. They're just generic — and generic is what makes readers skim.

3

Two passes, in this order

Don't try to fix everything at once. Two focused passes works far better:

Pass 1 — substance

Is it true, complete, and about the right thing? Fix facts, missing points, and anything that misrepresents you.

Ask: "Would I put my name on this claim?"

Pass 2 — voice

Now make it sound like you. Cut the filler, vary the rhythm, replace stiff phrasing with how you'd actually say it.

Ask: "Would I say this out loud to a colleague?"

Read it aloud. The single fastest test for voice. Anything you stumble over is a sentence to cut.
4

Get your voice back in (with a little help)

Two moves that work well together — one done by you, one done by AI:

Rewrite the opening and closing yourself. First and last lines carry most of the personality. Write those in your own words.

Feed it your voice. "Here's how I usually write. Rewrite this in that style." (Straight from Lesson 7.)

"Cut anything that sounds like marketing. Keep my sentence style. Don't make it longer."
5

The final check before you send

Thirty seconds. Five questions. Then ship it.

1

Are the facts right? Names, numbers, dates, claims — spot-check the ones that matter.

2

Does it sound like a person? Cut any sentence that could belong to anyone.

3

Is anything private still in it? Names, figures, details that shouldn't travel.

4

Does it say what you meant? Not what it's about — what you wanted it to do.

5

Would I sign this? If yes, stop editing. Good enough shipped beats perfect unshipped.

6

Disclose when it matters — and don't when it doesn't

There's no universal rule, but a sensible line: disclose when the reader would be surprised or misled if they found out.

Usually fine without saying

Personal emails, notes to yourself, brainstorming, drafts you've substantively edited and own.

Disclose or avoid

Academic work, journalism, anything presented as your first-hand expertise, and settings with their own rules (school, employer, client).

The mindset that makes it click

You're the lead — and the lead signs off

A great manager doesn't send a junior's draft straight to the client. They read it, adjust it, add what only they know, and put their name on it.

The draft was never the deliverable. The deliverable is what you sign. Edit like it's yours, because it is.

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